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    « Reply #15 on: June 01, 2011, 09:07:39 PM »

    Hello, this is for KnotMe. It was the first request, and I will be starting on the next one for Auroarah tomorrow after a night of brainstorming. I will be the first one to tell you that this wasn't the easiest scenario to write for with such little time and space, so it wasn't as exciting as I was originally intending it to be. When I first started writing I realized nearly four pages in that it wasn't progressing quickly enough, and that it wasn't going where I wanted it to go. So I ended up scrapping the first draft altogether and began work on the second draft, which you will see below. I wasn't too enthusiastic because of another long, hot day of moving, (and I'm very hungry) but I did manage to write it and make it interesting. It sits in at just under three pages in length (In Microsoft Word), and focuses more on development than the smut... but it isn't my best work. Lol. But hey, its just a debut and things will get better as time goes on. Now if only I could find something to eat in my barren apartment.  Undecided

    Character Names:  Antonio and Sarah
    Character Ages:  Antonio 29 and Sarah 27
    Character sexes:  Antonio (male)  and Sarah (female)
    Character Species:  Antonio (liger) and Sarah (lioness)
    Physical Description:  Antonio is 5'11" while Sarah stands about 5'3".  Antonio has white fur and blonde hair, while Sarah has a bit more of a golden tone on her fur with auburn hair.  Antonio has royal blue eyes and Sarah has brown eyes.  Antonio is a charming, funny, sweet, and a dominant.  While Sarah is more of a submissive, sweet, kind and adventurous.  Both muzzles are black.  And Antonio has a very creative mind when it comes to certain things.
    Scenario Description:  Sarah has just decided to give herself to Antonio and become his submissive, to be taught and led by Antonio and trained by him.
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    This wasn’t exactly what she was used to, Sarah noted as she patiently lay blindfolded on the bed.  It wasn’t too terribly uncomfortable, but with her paws tied behind her back and tail looped into the intricate knots that bound her wrists together, the lioness knew that if she aggravated the situation things could possibly get worse. As the minutes ticked by, the woman realized after testing her bonds that if she moved her wrists from side to side the bindings slid back and forth over her tail; the feline murred in delight as the silk rubbed the base of her sensitive appendage, the friction sending sparks of pleasure up her spine. Another thing realized while waiting for her Antonio to return was that if she really tried, the bindings could be easily shed, but as her form quivered in anticipation of what was to come, where would be the fun in that?

    “Antonio,” The feline let an exasperated yowl escape from her throat, “Just how long do you plan to keep me… waiting like this?”

    Sarah’s ears perked up as she heard footsteps head towards the bedroom, and when the door opened the lioness felt a level of giddiness that she hadn’t felt since she was a young girl standing in line to enter the local theme park for the first time; she fully expected this night to be a roller-coaster. “What have you been doing all this time? You tie me up, pleasure me for a few moments, and then leave me alone for what seems like the better part of a half an hour-!”

    The woman recoiled a surprise as an intense cold pressed itself against the tip of her sensitive nose, the action accompanied by a deep and husky “hush” as he sat down behind her; the bed dipped as he shifted his weight, and thankfully Sarah slid backwards just enough dislodge the cold object. As she inhaled a sweet scent filled her nose, and her tongue slid out to lick quickly melting wetness away.

    “Strawberry ice cream?”

    “Yes, my dear… strawberry ice cream.” Antonio rumbled as he spooned up against her; only his left paw explored her naked body freely, so she assumed that his right held onto the sweet confectionary.

    “I’m sorry I took so long to come back, I wanted to find just the perfect brand at the convenience store.”

    “The convenience store?” She growled deeply, “You got me all hot and bothered, tied me up-!”

    “You need to talk less, pet.” The liger rumbled as he propped himself up on his elbow to touch the tip of the ice cream bar to her nose again. He chuckled as he jerked her head away slightly, and he watched her mouth intently as he traced the strawberry flavored cream along her lips; much to his pleasure she opened her mouth slowly, letting the frozen treat slip seductively into her muzzle.

    “There we go beautiful,” He grinned, the hybrid feline gently kissing the backs of her ears, “Now that is something productive.”

    Sarah sighed and continued to bob along the length of the bar until the woman felt that she satisfied him enough, and the bar left with a satisfying pop. She licked her lips playfully and shivered when she felt her lover’s lips grace the tender flesh on her ears. “So what exactly are we going to do?”

    “Well…” Antonio began, “There is a lot to learn when giving one’s self to someone else… there are a lot of different areas of responsibilities as well as avenues to explore.” He grinned as shuddered when the ice cream traced her jawline and down her neck to rest at the junction of her collarbone and shoulder. Just as she opened her mouth and was about to complain about the cold he dipped his head retraced the dessert’s path with his tongue; the journey was long and slow, the liger taking great satisfaction in watching her parted lips work wordlessly.

    “Kissing,” He murmured, placing a quick, light kiss upon her lips; he grinned when she raised her head to try and chase his muzzle to continue deepen the minute display of affection. “Biting, clawing, tugging, spanking, changes in temperature… these are just a few of many different aspects that I am going to show you… but we would both be foolish if we were try everything in one night. So instead we’re going to try things little by little, where each night I’m going to introduce you to something new… and exciting. I want you to trust me… and it seems we’re working on building a good foundation for the things to come with what we have going on already.”

    As he finished speaking he tugged lightly on the restraints just to illustrate what he was talking about moments before; bondage, even what some would consider ‘vanilla’, takes a considerable amount of faith and trust on the part of the tied. “So tonight we’re really only going to experiment with what we have here. Tomorrow night though…” He grinned into her neck as he gingerly applied the wet ice cream to left nipple and watched her jump in surprise, “We’re going to play around with what most people like to refer to as the ‘hot/cold’ treatment.”

    “But… you know what? As for tonight, I think we’ve had enough of the play. I would like to feel your hands all over me.” With a simple tug of his wrist, the silk that had bound her together simply fell apart, and within a split second the lioness shed them and light-furred liger found himself underneath a very frustrated woman.

    “Tonight is going to be all about me, you hear?” She rumbled, the feline roughly grinding her damp sex along his firm and well muscled torso.

    “Oh, I hear you loud and clear.” He rumbled with a grin, “Hows about I slip out of these pants so the festivities for the evening can begin?”
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    « Reply #16 on: June 01, 2011, 09:29:15 PM »

    I like what I read thanks....but color me crazy but I dont think all 3 pages of what was written on your word document got posted on here....if it did must of been some big lettering you were using Cheesy  If there is more could you please add the rest Cheesy


    Let me also add that I really like and appreciate that you didnt go all out smut with it, and focused it the way you did.  I am very pleased with it Cheesy
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    « Reply #17 on: June 01, 2011, 10:36:56 PM »

    I like what I read thanks....but color me crazy but I dont think all 3 pages of what was written on your word document got posted on here....if it did must of been some big lettering you were using Cheesy  If there is more could you please add the rest Cheesy

    Let me also add that I really like and appreciate that you didnt go all out smut with it, and focused it the way you did.  I am very pleased with it Cheesy
    Well smut is all well and fun, but I like *good* smut. Lol. And that was right at the two page mark... oh, I realize I included the description of the short as well. About 2 1/2 pages then. I only used 11 font, but it was the default like 1.5 spacing or something. *shrugs* Lol. Its all there, I just decided to leave it open ended just in case I feel like coming back and finishing it. Cheesy
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    « Reply #18 on: June 02, 2011, 01:10:11 AM »

    Ahhhh well if you do finish it or dont I like how you did it and what you did with it Cheesy


    I will have to come up with another one for you after you are finished with auro's Cheesy
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    « Reply #19 on: June 02, 2011, 07:52:44 AM »

    KNOT: Default font for FOURM typeface is Trebuchet MS 8.... Normal font on Word is Times New Roman 12, requiered for most professional paper type work.  With the typeface on these pages, 1.5 pages in length, if you include the intro and description of your story, 2.5 to 3 on word.

    PSY: Nicely done, not sumtty, or at least what I term smutty. I thought it well played out. Nice for a "QUICKIE" write.
    Do me a favor, before you post the one you have written with my ideas, would you please send a copy to me either PM or email.
    BUT Please, continue with KNOT's story before you get to mine. And do get some food in that new place of yours before you fizzle out completely between this heat and no nourishment.
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    « Reply #20 on: June 02, 2011, 07:31:35 PM »

    Oh yes, the dreaded editing! I'm glad I don't have to do that! What trumps me is the endings, because I don't want things to end.
    I guess I'm hunting a new publisher for my last book I finished back in FEB. of this year.  I haven't heard anything back from the publisher who requested my first chapters and explination about the plotline of the book. It's been 4 months now.. grrr. Time to look other places.
    You would think being a romance novelest, it wouldn't be hard to get your book published nationally.

    SO J, you've perked my interest as to what series you have written,,, DO TELL....
    I have written a sci-fi series called NCX: A Trilogy, And Justice For All, Operation: Capture Cyborg!, Double-Legal Trouble! and Captain's Final Log Entry. This series is set in the early part of the 22nd century. Some of the crew are half human, half dog, half human, half feline etc. which is why I love ZP here for being able to allow me to experience what one of these crewmembers might be like.  If you want any of the titles, just let me know and I will be happy to send it along. The second series is about a really hot looking lawyer in a small town here in Colorado. It is called the Daniel Marcos series and when I make my final payment to the publisher, all 6 books will be available. Wink.

    Editing takes a long time, easy enough to write, however, not so easy to fix some of the mistakes that I made. However, I keep pushing on!
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    « Reply #21 on: June 02, 2011, 09:08:19 PM »

    Good evening J,
    They all Sound great! I am a TREKEE and Star Wars fan. And I  Love the Half human/animal concept. Who knows what type of "people" will  be crawling the eartly rocks in the next century. Some of my characters are shape shifters, for instance, Native Americans to their Spirit Guide animals.
    And yes, I agree about Zeta and experience... it's great!

    I selfpublished my first book, but I got a nice recommendation from a well known romance novelest that lives not too far away from me. So I took her advice and her recommendation and sent it to her publisher. They asked for the first 3 chapters and I haven't heard yet... UGGH. Impaitence.. IT's like waiting for Bears toys to arrive!

    AND Yes, I would be honored to read your series. Currently reading one of a werewolf series.  Its based in New Orleans, and I just love New Orleans! So that makes it all the better.  I would even like to read the next one about the lawyer. Small town, you mean something that hasn't been taken over by the growth of Denver or Colorado Springs, ore even Grand Junction? LOL Rifle perhaps, or Glenwood Springs? Greely? Am I anywhere near right on the map?  Grin


    SRY Psy, off your subject here a bit, yes, I know. but being writers, we've all got to stick it out don't we?LOL
    Have a great night and weekend everyone!
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    « Reply #22 on: June 03, 2011, 08:38:30 PM »

    Good evening J,
    They all Sound great! I am a TREKEE and Star Wars fan. And I  Love the Half human/animal concept. Who knows what type of "people" will  be crawling the eartly rocks in the next century. Some of my characters are shape shifters, for instance, Native Americans to their Spirit Guide animals.
    And yes, I agree about Zeta and experience... it's great!

    I selfpublished my first book, but I got a nice recommendation from a well known romance novelest that lives not too far away from me. So I took her advice and her recommendation and sent it to her publisher. They asked for the first 3 chapters and I haven't heard yet... UGGH. Impaitence.. IT's like waiting for Bears toys to arrive!

    AND Yes, I would be honored to read your series. Currently reading one of a werewolf series.  Its based in New Orleans, and I just love New Orleans! So that makes it all the better.  I would even like to read the next one about the lawyer. Small town, you mean something that hasn't been taken over by the growth of Denver or Colorado Springs, ore even Grand Junction? LOL Rifle perhaps, or Glenwood Springs? Greely? Am I anywhere near right on the map?  Grin


    SRY Psy, off your subject here a bit, yes, I know. but being writers, we've all got to stick it out don't we?LOL
    Have a great night and weekend everyone!
    Well, let me know what titles  you want and I will send them to you. Just give me a PM with the address Wink Cheesy. I was born and raised in Grand Junction but the town is called Ironton, Colorado. For 9/11 security reasons I moved the town's actual location from where it is at to just above Silverton, Colorado.

    As far as being impatient with a publisher, I can tell you sometimes it does take some time to get a response from them. Once you rdo, the money$$$ can be VERY FINE. Just remember to read the fine print. And, Anne Rice writes Bisexual porn under a penname and makes decent 6 Figure income from it. Her other books are what she calls "Chump" change for her. Grin Cheesy Wink.
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    « Reply #23 on: June 06, 2011, 03:12:38 PM »

    SRY Psy, off your subject here a bit, yes, I know. but being writers, we've all got to stick it out don't we?LOL
    Have a great night and weekend everyone!
    Lol, its cool. I haven't been online. When I finally moved into that new apartment... I had to move back into my old one. >.< God, and then I move into *another* apartment next month... I just want to get this over with. And I haven't had the internet in a couple of days... and the fact that my older brother will be staying with me over the summer will be taking up a lot of my time. I will write your section like I promised, but until further notice the submissions will be closed... I'm picking up a job and I just got a new puppeh... so my summer will be chock full and whatnot. If I have time I will re-open the submissions and stuff. But I have to go, its good talking to you all again!
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    « Reply #24 on: June 06, 2011, 03:22:30 PM »

    No rush on my part. Just take care of you and yours. Sounds like you got a movin bug. I don't blame you for wanting to get that out of the way. Been there myself.
    Good luck with the pup and the job!
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    « Reply #25 on: June 10, 2011, 09:45:56 PM »

    Sounds great, but I think I might stay out of this one; my mind wonders too much as a published writer myself. Wink Grin Cheesy

    Published?   We should talk. Send me a PM.

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    « Reply #26 on: June 10, 2011, 10:31:34 PM »

    Published?   We should talk. Send me a PM.

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    YES! and I'm getting 2 copies of his books! *Trots around in Glee*
    Oh, but so am I! LOL Er, published that is... HEHE.
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    « Reply #27 on: June 10, 2011, 10:42:53 PM »

    YES! and I'm getting 2 copies of his books! *Trots around in Glee*
    Oh, but so am I! LOL Er, published that is... HEHE.

    I saw that after I posted. Lucky you. we'll have to chat sometime. I want to finish my works and get published.

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    « Reply #28 on: June 12, 2011, 09:24:03 PM »

    I saw that after I posted. Lucky you. we'll have to chat sometime. I want to finish my works and get published.

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    Oh, you must tell me of your "works" I would like to know what they consist of.
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